12.15.2008

LATE WINTER

Cumulus drift over tumulus
barrow of last year's leaves

A snowmelt fog floats rose cone dolmens

Atop the elm nestled
nits in hair -- now growing after death

-- grackles crackle static:

we tune into a mystery
Tick-tack-tick sleet indeed

was condensation of long bones
in a womb we forgot;

femurs from ice crystal matrices
stump forth with green foot prints

3 comments:

  1. This is a good match to my mood today, even though it obviously isn't late winter yet. In fact, "grackles crackle static" reminds me of the word music I was playing with this morning (not all of which made it into the Morning Porch).

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  2. femurs from ice crystal matrices
    stump forth with green foot prints


    One thing I've loved about your poetry from the start is that your fondness for difficult vocabulary (I have to look up more words from your poems that from anyone else's I read, I think, except maybe House of Toast Paula's) you always come back to those methodic hammer-blow single-syllable-word lines. They feel so strong & deliberate.

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  3. oops, that sentence doesn't parse. I think maybe it was supposed to run "despite your fondness for..."

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