6.07.2009

GREETING CARD

Hope floats -
a languid, ludicrous buoy:
bears no expectations
marks the lane
in which despair -
flipturn birth to death -
laps the murk
with killer swimmer's thighs

2 comments:

  1. I'd buy twenty of these, like a shot :-)

    Great poem. "Flipturn birth to death." So perfectly placed.

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  2. I'm imagining an entire line (Hellmark?), to commemorate moments like the 3 p.m. Sunday blues. Paired, naturally, with oddly appropriate napkin drawings.

    Interesting comment on "flipturn". I move it every twenty minutes, like the new couch in an octagonal living room.

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