11.22.2008

A UNIVERSE

Raisin cake, a rubber band:

undigested clumps and voids
bunchily constrain
expansion, like the waistband
of cheap pants
or love

A potato-shaped moonlet--

a mere asteroid--
can root into deep space loam,
grasp tight its bug satellite,
fight immensities

But the cosmic taffy-yank

yields not in my home field
No glittered cluster
or binary geisha--my
force could not alter his course

So help plot his orbited

return, oh doughy bike-mad
neighbor, strain beetle-
blue helmet straps; so moonlit,
tilt happy grub face

1 comment:

  1. Hmm. I'll return. This one is baffling me at the moment. As always the sound is brilliant. But when I hit "binary geisha" I know I'm completely lost, just no idea :-)

    but this stanza grips me:

    a mere asteroid--
    can root inito deep space loam,
    grasp tight its bug satellite,
    fight immensities


    And so does the last. Back to the terrors of the schoolyard?

    (Looking back the clumps & voids stanza also rocks. But I know I'm missing something important that strings it all together here. Maybe my science is too flabby?)

    It's so fun to get to read more of your stuff!

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