A UNIVERSE
Raisin cake, a rubber band:
undigested clumps and voids
bunchily constrain
expansion, like the waistband
of cheap pants
or love
A potato-shaped moonlet--
a mere asteroid--
can root into deep space loam,
grasp tight its bug satellite,
fight immensities
But the cosmic taffy-yank
yields not in my home field
No glittered cluster
or binary geisha--my
force could not alter his course
So help plot his orbited
return, oh doughy bike-mad
neighbor, strain beetle-
blue helmet straps; so moonlit,
tilt happy grub face
11.22.2008
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Hmm. I'll return. This one is baffling me at the moment. As always the sound is brilliant. But when I hit "binary geisha" I know I'm completely lost, just no idea :-)
ReplyDeletebut this stanza grips me:
a mere asteroid--
can root inito deep space loam,
grasp tight its bug satellite,
fight immensities
And so does the last. Back to the terrors of the schoolyard?
(Looking back the clumps & voids stanza also rocks. But I know I'm missing something important that strings it all together here. Maybe my science is too flabby?)
It's so fun to get to read more of your stuff!